Business Card for Advertisement

Dimitry · 04-05-2004, 08:28 AM

Basicly this card would be used to advertise the business in Restaurants and such.

About 10 mins after I put this together I started disliking many of the parts, so I will probably redo this soon.
Just wanted to get some feedback.

Dimitry

---------- Update ----------
The only thing I really dislike is the whole right part and also the big text up top (not designwise, but what it says).

These the are parts I will be definatly replacing
Dimitry

---------- Update ----------
Some parts redone.

Dimitry

P.S. Keep in mind there wont be the big white border. Thats just there for bleed (gets cut off).

jesse · 04-05-2004, 09:58 AM

i like it, except for the 'we sure are' part. Phone and fax is a little hard to see.

armin.dk · 10-05-2004, 07:02 PM

Like it, don't remove the white border completely, but maybe half the size i has now.

Lucas · 13-05-2004, 08:11 PM

The background texture seems a bit too...grainy for the business card type of design. You should rather have a more professional approach to it. Maybe take the texture out, but keep the same green color.

04-05-2004, 08:28 AM	#1 (permalink)
Dimitry Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2003 Posts: 153	Business Card for Advertisement Basicly this card would be used to advertise the business in Restaurants and such. About 10 mins after I put this together I started disliking many of the parts, so I will probably redo this soon. Just wanted to get some feedback. Dimitry ---------- Update ---------- The only thing I really dislike is the whole right part and also the big text up top (not designwise, but what it says). These the are parts I will be definatly replacing Dimitry ---------- Update ---------- Some parts redone. Dimitry P.S. Keep in mind there wont be the big white border. Thats just there for bleed (gets cut off).

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04-05-2004, 09:58 AM	#2 (permalink)
jesse scumm fan. Join Date: Apr 2004 Posts: 125	i like it, except for the 'we sure are' part. Phone and fax is a little hard to see.

10-05-2004, 07:02 PM	#3 (permalink)
armin.dk Junior Member Join Date: Apr 2004 Posts: 13	Like it, don't remove the white border completely, but maybe half the size i has now.

13-05-2004, 08:11 PM	#4 (permalink)
Lucas Junior Member Join Date: Apr 2004 Posts: 2	The background texture seems a bit too...grainy for the business card type of design. You should rather have a more professional approach to it. Maybe take the texture out, but keep the same green color.