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Old 27-07-2005, 12:14 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Default Need investor - revolutionary Music Education Software

Groundbreaking music software program will change the way we learn music - making it possible to learn much faster. Top notch software development team very eager and motivated to bring this monster to life and they are all musicians as well. Award winning concert pianist waiting in Austria to help put curriculum together. Concept and architecture thoroughly worked out down to tinniest details (even opening screen shot and theme song). The storyline in this program alone is fantastic and virtually wrote itself with characters with attitude and life. There is a ton of humor in this program (my genius friend and I stayed up for hours just laughing at the possibilities). This breakthrough in music will make history, conduct biggest experiment in history of music, and dominate a $10mil market as well as expand it. The few that have heard even half (including a genius with 165iq) have been very excited. Need investor with some descent pockets like $250K descent.



For the lucky individual that can do that will be the rewards of an ungodly investment return and the chance to make history and be apart of something special.



I have an outstanding lawyer so the paper work will be beyond legit and my terms are fair.



If you’re that lucky S.O.B. give me a call at 562-234-7886 Marcus
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Old 27-07-2005, 09:45 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Default Re: Need investor - revolutionary Music Education Software

Maybe it works for some, but I would certainly recommend improving the business proposal to make clear about aims and objectives, how they are being approached and met, and also why you think your able to represent such a product properly.

Telling me that you have a friend with an IQ of 165 tells me nothing about your business acumen, and having any kind of proposal that is riddled with spelling errors and even calls prospective investors for $250k an "S.O.B." I should think shows a galling lack of professionalism to the whole topic.

So far the above is filled with wonderful adjectives where you describe your own sense of worth regarding the product - but at no point do you provide any relevant detail on how you think such a product will challenge existing markets,let alone profitably.

And those are the most important details.

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Old 23-08-2005, 09:33 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Heard of hearandplay dotttcom?

That guy makes tons, check out his method.

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Old 25-08-2005, 11:55 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Re: Music education software

We are a uk based investment company investing in new ideas, please contact us by e-mail with your full business plan.

We will have a look and get back to you in due course,

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Old 23-10-2005, 04:12 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Brian,

I like your style!

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